Old school
The house was gloriously quiet and still today, allowing me to get back to World War 3.3. As I expected, I wasn’t able to spin up from nothing to seven hours of two-fisted manuscript punching. But I managed four hours of concentrated work, and I’m gonna take that as a win.
Mostly I worked at my desktop, but I got to one part of the chapter I’m working on at the moment (a little spoiler alert: Kim Philby and Guy Burgess tooling around the Outback, playing at saboteurs) and I thought, you know, now would be the time for these two to have a talk about everything going on in their lives.
First, I had to check that I hadn’t killed them off in the original series. So I went to my Axis of Time GPT and asked whether any of the Cambridge spies had been mentioned. It assured me that they hadn’t, which doesn’t mean I didn’t write something about them, because as we’ve all learned, the robots just make stuff up. But this GPT is reasonably robust, and I’m pretty sure that in this case I can trust it. Still, if anybody recalls me mentioning Philby, Burgess, or Maclean at any point in the last twenty years of writing these books, please let me know so I can get on with my retconning.
Anyway, I was trying to imagine myself into the scene where these two are having a deep and meaningful about the weird lives they’ve led after the Transition, and I thought, it’s just not happening for me. Probably because I was still getting over the inertia of the three-week break for the roof repairs.
So I decided I’d do it old school. I would write the scene by hand. Of course, old school these days involves an e-ink tablet and a stylus, so I pulled out my cheap Chinese scratch pad and started writing.
It was slow going. I’m still blocking out the scene. But I was reminded once again of how the different forms of writing seem to call on different parts of the brain.
Mostly these days, I draft with dictation, and I’ve built up those neural pathways to where I’m really comfortable doing it. Occasionally, I’ll draft at the keyboard, but mostly I do my editing there.
The last time I routinely worked with pen and paper (and it was actually pen and paper, not an e-ink tablet) was when I was grinding my way through Leviathan and would hit a wall. I knew I was trying to make some big thinky point about the history of the city, and for some reason, it just wasn’t coming to me.
At that point I was living in Bondi. I’d take myself off for a walk up and down the beach, interrogating myself about what it was I was trying to say. And when I had a better idea about it, I’d pull out my notepad and pen, and I’d just sit down and write the proposed section out longhand. It seemed to help.
So that’s where I was today. That’s where I am right now, as it happens, so I’d better get back to it.



No wonder it was slow going, the pen is in the wrong hand!
Kim Philby. Huh. Have you read Declare by Tim Powers?
It was pretty damn good, but I reckon The Drawing of the Dark is still his best book.
I love these modern historical fantasy novels. I just finished the Milkweed trilogy by Ian Tregillis, which was pretty great as well.